No it wont.
Firstly to format your post correctly use the </> button, not the quote button, or do this: https://community.home-assistant.io/t/how-to-help-us-help-you-or-how-to-ask-a-good-question/114371#oneone-format-it-properly-16
Second, when you want to know how do do something look it up in the docs. If you go to the integrations search page and search for “number” it will lead you here: https://www.home-assistant.io/integrations/number/ Which has the details of the actions you need:
Unfortunately no example this time but most pages have them. So you want the number.set_value action
triggers:
- trigger: state # this trigggers on all valid temperature changes
entity_id: sensor.temperature # this is where your Aqara sensor goes
not_to:
- unavailable
- unknown
actions:
- action: number.set_vaue
target:
entity_id: number.thermostat_hc2_room_temperature_from_remote
data:
value: "{{ trigger.to_state.state }}"