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As Taras showed in the previous post, there is no need to use all those loops since the area_entities function can be applied across the list of areas using map, and the list can be flattened with sum:
type: custom:mushroom-template-card
primary: Ground Floor
icon: >
{% set x = floor_areas('ground_floor') | map('area_entities') | sum(start=[])
| select('match', 'light') | select('is_state', 'on') | list | count %}
{{ 'mdi:lightbulb-on' if x > 0 else 'mdi:lightbulb-off' }}
icon_color: >-
{% set x = floor_areas('ground_floor') | map('area_entities') | sum(start=[])
| select('match', 'light') | select('is_state', 'on') | list | count %}
{{ 'yellow' if x > 0 else 'gray' }}
secondary: >
{% set x = floor_areas('ground_floor') | map('area_entities') | sum(start=[])
| select('match', 'light') | select('is_state', 'on') | list | count %}
There are {{ x }} lights on the ground floor, {{user}}!
tap_action:
action: call-service
service: script.light_ground_floor_off
target: {}
multiline_secondary: false
hold_action:
action: call-service
service: script.light_ground_floor_on
target: {}